He uses the air gun to spray the stone powder out of his clothes. A dancing bear in a cloud of dust. Then he dips his head, goggles and all, into the large oil drum containing rainwater. He pulls down his overalls and staggers, dripping, with his pants around his ankles, looking for something to sit on because he forgot to take off his work boots.
I get that you consolidated the two weekly posts into one email so as not to spam us. However, a newcomer to your work who's reading your essay fast could easily miss that the link is a portal to a whole other world. May I suggest making the link, the invitation, to the novel much more foregrounded and impossible to miss?
Yes sir, my marketing is not very marketable. Rearranging things here so people can opt in or out from different sections of the newsletter. I just noticed the non-fiction people tend to unsubscribe when bothered with a weekly chapter....maybe I can up the visuals on the naked knights?
I get that you consolidated the two weekly posts into one email so as not to spam us. However, a newcomer to your work who's reading your essay fast could easily miss that the link is a portal to a whole other world. May I suggest making the link, the invitation, to the novel much more foregrounded and impossible to miss?
Yes sir, my marketing is not very marketable. Rearranging things here so people can opt in or out from different sections of the newsletter. I just noticed the non-fiction people tend to unsubscribe when bothered with a weekly chapter....maybe I can up the visuals on the naked knights?
That's what I was thinking, something to make it stand out. Not stark naked though, always wanna leave something for the imagination :)
Yes